tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-823279847440048376.post8654776464885870772..comments2023-04-10T00:16:28.535-07:00Comments on Brit Grit: FRIDAY FLASH FICTIONAlan Griffithshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12890190137499272096noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-823279847440048376.post-42440838008780833812009-11-19T11:22:07.637-08:002009-11-19T11:22:07.637-08:00Thanks for the kind comment David, which means a l...Thanks for the kind comment David, which means a lot to me - I'm a fan of your writing and also BTAP, which is full of top notch writing. Best Wishes.Alan Griffithshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12890190137499272096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-823279847440048376.post-55496991494048918882009-11-19T09:33:29.730-08:002009-11-19T09:33:29.730-08:00I enjoyed your story Alan. And Dig that ending and...I enjoyed your story Alan. And Dig that ending and final line.David Cranmerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04749857752139212888noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-823279847440048376.post-72514797463665034022009-11-19T04:48:23.755-08:002009-11-19T04:48:23.755-08:00Thanks for the kind comment Lewis.
I've left ...Thanks for the kind comment Lewis. <br />I've left a few words over at your blog - let me know what you think and good luck with all your stuff.<br />Best Wishes.Alan Griffithshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12890190137499272096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-823279847440048376.post-60617279388808600412009-11-19T02:29:02.791-08:002009-11-19T02:29:02.791-08:00Great story.
I'm interested in the fact that ...Great story.<br /><br />I'm interested in the fact that you seem happy to self-publish in this way. What are your thoughts on the use of the net by writers? More here - http://lewisjpeters.blogspot.com/2009/11/three-camps.html.Lewis Petershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07977006391190429073noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-823279847440048376.post-88991731075857737172009-11-18T09:29:09.632-08:002009-11-18T09:29:09.632-08:00Thanks for your comments all.
I was not totally s...Thanks for your comments all. <br />I was not totally sure about this piece after I’d finished the first draft and when it was finally finished I came to the conclusion that I prefer writing Valentine using first person POV. That said, I had fun writing it and I’m glad you enjoyed it. <br />Best wishes.Alan Griffithshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12890190137499272096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-823279847440048376.post-1133379528075682722009-11-18T00:59:20.838-08:002009-11-18T00:59:20.838-08:00Great story. Loving the titles!Great story. Loving the titles!NQhttp://www.hullcrimefiction.co.uknoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-823279847440048376.post-83525318560126487702009-11-17T12:30:00.345-08:002009-11-17T12:30:00.345-08:00Ha, a chip off the old block, now that's godda...Ha, a chip off the old block, now that's goddamn awesome.Randal Graveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08728992897551848531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-823279847440048376.post-1316513463723404652009-11-17T08:41:34.948-08:002009-11-17T08:41:34.948-08:00"Her backside, he decided, could crack walnut..."Her backside, he decided, could crack walnuts." What a line!!!<br /><br />Great tale from begining to end!<br /><br />DocDochttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16979621370660001312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-823279847440048376.post-55480622205685073222009-11-16T23:07:46.215-08:002009-11-16T23:07:46.215-08:00Yeah, I laughed out loud at "Lola". But ...Yeah, I laughed out loud at "Lola". But Valentine being Pork Pie's son was as shocking as Darth Vader and Luke. Great Story!Commander Zaiushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11000824454124236774noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-823279847440048376.post-19852895945495287232009-11-16T19:54:11.238-08:002009-11-16T19:54:11.238-08:00(thump)
That was me knocked flat.
Whoa.(thump)<br />That was me knocked flat.<br /><br />Whoa.Cormac Brownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02990698766444728760noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-823279847440048376.post-25484994834130211962009-11-16T16:03:08.416-08:002009-11-16T16:03:08.416-08:00Ttremendous stuff Alan. Really enjoyed it, mate.
...Ttremendous stuff Alan. Really enjoyed it, mate.<br />Pissed myself at...."Her name was Lola.."<br />Regards, David.David Barberhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05006533626998905560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-823279847440048376.post-61874072464604600702009-11-16T15:29:21.549-08:002009-11-16T15:29:21.549-08:00I thought there was a resemblance. Very good Alan...I thought there was a resemblance. Very good Alan.MRMacrumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01414173517957120477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-823279847440048376.post-8098963301907022542009-11-16T14:02:43.689-08:002009-11-16T14:02:43.689-08:00It's a family affair... oh, wrong band. very s...It's a family affair... oh, wrong band. very smart, mate.Paul D Brazillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12881642426845398389noreply@blogger.com