tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-823279847440048376.post2971455953587079182..comments2023-04-10T00:16:28.535-07:00Comments on Brit Grit: FRIDAY FLASH FICTIONAlan Griffithshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12890190137499272096noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-823279847440048376.post-47059282725181922872009-11-11T12:47:58.439-08:002009-11-11T12:47:58.439-08:00BB and Randal,
Thanks for dropping by and for the...BB and Randal,<br /><br />Thanks for dropping by and for the kind comments. Glad you liked the tale.Alan Griffithshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12890190137499272096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-823279847440048376.post-71871612115678530632009-11-11T06:23:23.005-08:002009-11-11T06:23:23.005-08:00Don't ever sweat the lingo, nothing wrong with...Don't ever sweat the lingo, nothing wrong with us yokels expanding the vocabulary, and on top of that, a fantastic story.Randal Graveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08728992897551848531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-823279847440048376.post-85599296261130037182009-11-10T16:29:50.261-08:002009-11-10T16:29:50.261-08:00This was a great story! Like the authentic, gritty...This was a great story! Like the authentic, gritty feel.Commander Zaiushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11000824454124236774noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-823279847440048376.post-34448863299247056762009-11-10T14:37:47.410-08:002009-11-10T14:37:47.410-08:00Thanks for your comments all, much appreciated.
A...Thanks for your comments all, much appreciated.<br /><br />Apologies if I got a bit carried away with the lingo and clichés but hopefully you enjoyed the tale as much as I had fun writing it.<br /><br />I thought about killing off Floppy but decided the best way to punish a stupid haircut was via his wallet, which I think Barbara will do!Alan Griffithshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12890190137499272096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-823279847440048376.post-26144415899479896092009-11-10T10:08:06.155-08:002009-11-10T10:08:06.155-08:00Jammed a lot of forbidden fruits into this one. I...Jammed a lot of forbidden fruits into this one. I knew Frank was a loser the moment he returned with a Scotch that had water in it. Any water not frozen is heresy. I had some difficulty with the vernacular what with me being a dumass Yank and all. Or maybe it's just a dumass thing. Regardless, Valentine has my attention. Nice writing Alan.MRMacrumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01414173517957120477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-823279847440048376.post-38382590861404860192009-11-09T20:55:45.242-08:002009-11-09T20:55:45.242-08:00Valentine is quickly becoming my favorite detectiv...Valentine is quickly becoming my favorite detective, though don't tell Crais and Mosely that. No wonder he's borderline broke, he has morals (thank God).Cormac Brownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02990698766444728760noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-823279847440048376.post-58229218109207227302009-11-09T12:50:22.012-08:002009-11-09T12:50:22.012-08:00A fantastic story that. Great lines. Love The Spec...A fantastic story that. Great lines. Love The Specials' hat tips too.Paul D Brazillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12881642426845398389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-823279847440048376.post-84895239861919534822009-11-09T11:56:32.303-08:002009-11-09T11:56:32.303-08:00"it was only a matter of time before he broke..."it was only a matter of time before he broke Mrs Fallon’s heart again. It’s what boys do and something we never grow out of."<br /><br />Effing brilliant!<br /><br />DocDochttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16979621370660001312noreply@blogger.com